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The brick manufacturing process

The brick manufacturing process BJJEm

The diagram show the stages by which bricks is been manufactured. Overall, it can be seen that, there are total of 7 stages to get brick ready for use. Although the 1st two does not follow the process. To begin, a heavy duty machine ( digger) will dig out clay from the soil, clay put on roller to grid the metal, this, reduce clay into smaller pieces then, water is added to form brick, from this point, brick can be cut by wire cutter or mould depending on the choice of the company before sending to dry oven for the next 24- 48 hours. Furthermore, after drying, it been transfered to kiln for moderate heat which takes about 200 degrees to 980 degrees then moves to high heat of 870 degrees to 1300 degrees. Finally, brick is sent to cooling chamber lasting 48 to 72 hours then, packaging follows and last stage the delivery van carries it out of factory.

The diagram Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "shows".shows
show
 the stages by which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "am", "are", "aren".amarearen
is
 been manufactured.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, there are Possible agreement error. Did you mean "totals"?totals
total
 of 7 stages to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick
 ready for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 the 1st two does not follow the process.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
, a 'heavy duty' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "heavy-duty".heavy-duty
heavy duty
 machine Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
( 
digger) will dig out clay from the soil, clay put on roller to grid the metal, this, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 clay into smaller pieces then, water is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to form You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick
, from this point, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick
 can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 by wire cutter or Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
 depending on the choice of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 sending to dry oven for the next
Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.24 – 4824–48
24- 48
 hours.

Furthermore
, after drying, it Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "was", "were"?waswere
been
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "transferred", the past tense form of the verb 'transfer'?transferredtransferee
transfered
 to kiln for moderate heat which takes about 200 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 to 980 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
 to high heat of 870 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 to 1300 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
. Finally
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to cooling chamber lasting 48 to 72 hours then, packaging follows and last stage the delivery van carries it out of factory. 