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The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant. The proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant. The proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets LrrPK
The pie charts data clearly shows the proportion of the Carbohydrates, protein and fat in three various diets, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport. It is noticeable that the sportspeople require a significantly higher proportion of carbohydrate compared to an average diet or a healthy diet. The average diet contains the lowest percentage of carbohydrate, but the highest amount of protein. Looking at the more information in more detail, an average diet and healthy diet contain exactly the same percentage of protein(20%), However a healthy diet for sport has contained the lowest proportion of protein(10% ) compared to other diets. As can be seen from charts, a healthy diet for the sport contains the highest percentage of carbohydrate(60%), on the other hand an average diet contains two-third of the healthy diet for sport. A healthy diet and an average diet contain significantly more percent of fat than a healthy diet for sport(15%).
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Carbohydrates
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in three various diets,
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average
diet, a
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healthy
diet and a
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healthy
diet for sport.

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significantly
higher proportion of
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carbohydrate
compared to an
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average
diet or a
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healthy
diet. The
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average
diet
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contains
the lowest percentage of
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carbohydrate
,
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the highest amount of protein.

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average
diet and
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healthy
diet
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contain
exactly the same percentage of protein(20%),
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healthy
diet for
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sport
has contained the lowest proportion of protein(10%
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compared to other diets.

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healthy
diet for the
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sport
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contains
the highest percentage of
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carbohydrate(60%)
,
on the other hand
an
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average
diet
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contains
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healthy
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sport
. A
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healthy
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contain
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fat
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healthy
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sport(15%)
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant. The proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets

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