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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. 855rk
The given table displayes trends concerning the amount of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Major types of food eaten are Hamburger, Fried Chicken, Salad, Fried Rice and Noodles. It can be clearly seen that the amount of fast food consumed over the period has increased as compared to the past. The table shows that amount of Salad eaten in 2005 versus 2025 has increased 8 times during the period. Roughly, we can say that salad consumtion has doubled as compared to present versus 2025. The consumption of salad during 2005 to 2025 has been increased in a linear way. However, the amount of Fried Rice consumed has been same during the same period. It is understandable from the table that though the units of Hamburger eaton had reduced in present as compared to 2005 but it has subsequently increased in the year 2025. We can see that the units of Hamburger eaton is maximum among all other fast food items. It clearly depicts that it is the most preferrable choice. The consumption of Fried Rice has mostly surged from 2005 to 2025. Taking a closer look at the table one can say that Fried Chicken was the second most consumed fast food in Melbourne.
The
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displayes
trends concerning the
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amount
of
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fast
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food
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consumed
in Melbourne. Major types of
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food
eaten are Hamburger,
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Fried
Chicken,
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Salad
,
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Fried
Rice and Noodles.

It can be
clearly
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seen
that the
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amount
of
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fast
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food
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consumed
over the period has
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increased
as compared to the past. The
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table
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shows
that
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amount
of
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Salad
eaten in 2005 versus 2025 has
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increased
8 times during the period. Roughly, we can say that
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salad
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consumtion
has doubled as compared to present versus 2025. The consumption of
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salad
during 2005 to 2025 has been
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increased
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in a linear way
.
However
, the
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amount
of
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Fried
Rice
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consumed
has been same during the same period.

It is understandable from the
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table
that though the units of Hamburger
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eaton
had
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reduced
in present as compared to 2005
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but
it has
subsequently
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increased
in the year 2025. We can
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see
that the units of Hamburger
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eaton
is maximum among all other
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fast
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food
items. It
clearly
depicts that it is the most
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preferrable
choice. The consumption of
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Fried
Rice has
mostly
surged from 2005 to 2025.

Taking a closer look at the
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one can say that
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Fried
Chicken was the second most
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consumed
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fast
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food
in Melbourne.
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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