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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. aMdd
An inception of the data in the first diagram reveals the scheme of a wave-energy machine, while the second represents the possible option for its locations. From the overall perspective, it can be clearly observed that a wave-energy generator consists of three main tools, namely chambers, turbine and electricity generator, serving water and its air flow. This machine can be sited at two conceivable places; however, their cost and final output significantly vary according to them. With respect to the design of the given device, it has two large chambers, which all the processes take place in. Water, running in particular direction as waves, is stored in the first chamber, and subsequently the gotten air is gone through the turbine, which is connected to an electricity generator. In the final stage, it is released to the atmosphere. Moreover, this is followed by the continually repetition of the cycle. As for the locations for wave-energy machines, it might be established among large waves as well as small. Nevertheless, the former accounts for substantially high output, with relative high expenses for installation, while the latter is responsible for quite low and undesirable results, therefore, with low construction costs.
An inception of the data in the
first
diagram reveals the scheme of a wave-energy machine, while the second represents the possible option for its locations.

From the
overall
perspective, it can be
clearly
observed that a wave-energy generator consists of three main tools,
namely
chambers, turbine and electricity generator, serving water and its air flow. This machine can
be sited
at two conceivable places;
however
, their cost and final output
significantly
vary according to them.

With respect to the design of the
given
device, it has two large chambers, which all the processes take place in. Water, running
in particular
direction as waves,
is stored
in the
first
chamber, and
subsequently
the gotten air
is gone
through the turbine, which
is connected
to an electricity generator. In the final stage, it
is released
to the atmosphere.
Moreover
, this
is followed
by the
continually
repetition of the cycle.

As for the locations for wave-energy machines, it might
be established
among large waves
as well
as
small
.
Nevertheless
, the former accounts for
substantially
high output, with relative high expenses for installation, while the latter is responsible for quite low and undesirable results,
therefore
, with low construction costs.
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