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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Gn02
The pictures illustrate engineering drawings of wave-energy machinery and its preferable location. There are two main components that built the machine and two choices of the site offered. Firstly, the waves are directed to the first chamber and the seawater fills it. Then, the movement of the water impacts the airflow in the lower chamber and transmits the air to the upper chamber. The airflow then triggers the turbine to rotate. While the turbine is rotating the airflow escapes from the chamber and at the same time it triggered the air from the outside to enter the upper chamber as well. The second airflow impacts the turbine to move as well. The rotation of the turbine generates the generator to create electricity. There are two options of wave-energy location. The first one is near the beach and the second one further. The first one costs more affordable than the second one. However, the electricity produces by the second one is larger than the first one.
The pictures illustrate engineering drawings of wave-energy machinery and its preferable location. There are two main components that built the machine and two choices of the site offered.

Firstly
, the waves
are directed
to the
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first
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chamber
and the seawater fills it. Then, the movement of the water impacts the
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airflow
in the lower
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chamber
and transmits the air to the upper
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chamber
. The
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airflow
then triggers the
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turbine
to rotate. While the
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turbine
is rotating the
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airflow
escapes from the
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chamber
and at the same time it triggered the air from the outside to enter the upper
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chamber
as well
. The second
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airflow
impacts the
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turbine
to
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move
as well
. The rotation of the
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turbine
generates the generator to create electricity.

There are two options of wave-energy location. The
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first
one is near the beach and the second one
further
. The
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first
one costs more affordable than the second one.
However
, the electricity produces by the second one is larger than the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
first
one.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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