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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. 0GQ1
The given line graph depicts the rate of unemployment in urban and rural areas of Australia in the four quarters of the year 2012. Overall, the percentage of unemployment has been growing in urban Australia, whereas, the percentage has decreased for rural Australia over the four quarters of 2012. The urban areas in Australia has seen a real growth in unemployment rate from the first quarter at about 2% to nearly 5% at the end of the year. While the unemployment rate saw a slight dip in the third quarter at 2% following the increase at 4% in the second quarter for urban areas, it still continued to grow for the fourth quarter landing at 4. 9%. In contrast to the growth of the urban areas, the rural areas of Australia saw a gradual decrease in rate of unemployment from around 6. 5% to 4. 5% at the second quarter. While there was a general decrease of unemployment rate, they had 5% of unemployed population in rural areas by the end 2012.
The
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given
line graph depicts the
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rate
of
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unemployment
in
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urban
and
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rural
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areas
of Australia in the four
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quarters
of the year 2012.

Overall
, the percentage of
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unemployment
has been growing in
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urban
Australia, whereas, the percentage has decreased for
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rural
Australia over the four
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quarters
of 2012.

The
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urban
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areas
in Australia has
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seen
a real growth in
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unemployment
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rate
from the
first
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quarter
at about 2% to
nearly
5% at the
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end
of the year. While the
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unemployment
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rate
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saw
a slight dip in the third
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quarter
at 2% following the increase at 4% in the second
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quarter
for
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urban
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areas
, it
still
continued to grow for the fourth
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quarter
landing at 4. 9%.

In contrast
to the growth of the
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urban
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areas
, the
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rural
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areas
of Australia
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saw
a gradual decrease in
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rate
of
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unemployment
from around 6. 5% to 4. 5% at the second
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quarter
. While there was a general decrease of
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unemployment
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rate
, they had 5% of unemployed population in
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rural
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areas
by the
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end
2012.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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