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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. 7bpk

The above draw analysis the process of wave-energy machine and their location. First of all, start with the wave direction that push into machine and on their stage with procedure of how the water levels faction to reach the middle stage and to transform to air. Second step of the generator are the waters levels that born the air flow, so, air flow pick up in the turbine and move to increase with rose line and dicrease with green line the air of chambers. Also the air flow moves everywere and push the flow of the machine to work and explore the electricity generator. Mostly, part are the chambers. Chambers also blow the water to air and create the energy. However, the chambers reach in new level the water. Conclude, the diagram show how waves turn out the electricity generator. The air that created is the most powerfull ingridient to success on this way of power.

The above draw analysis the process of wave-energy machine and their location.

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First of all
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with the wave direction that push into machine and on their stage with procedure of how the water levels faction to reach the middle stage and to transform to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
. Second step of the generator are the waters levels that born the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreamtidefloodoutflowprogressdischarge
flow
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreamtidefloodoutflowprogressdischarge
flow
 pick up in the turbine and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to increase with rose line and Possible spelling mistake found.decrease
dicrease
 with green line the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 of chambers.

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Also
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreamtidefloodoutflowprogressdischarge
flow
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocates
moves
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everywere
 and push the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreamtidefloodoutflowprogressdischarge
flow
 of the machine to work and explore the electricity generator. Mostly
, part are the chambers. Chambers also
 blow the water to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 and create the energy. However
, the chambers reach in new level the water.

Conclude, the diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 how waves turn out the electricity generator. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 that created is the most Possible spelling mistake found.powerfulpowerfullypower fullpowerful l
powerfull
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ingridient
 to success on this way of power. 