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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. 7bpk
The above draw analysis the process of wave-energy machine and their location. First of all, start with the wave direction that push into machine and on their stage with procedure of how the water levels faction to reach the middle stage and to transform to air. Second step of the generator are the waters levels that born the air flow, so, air flow pick up in the turbine and move to increase with rose line and dicrease with green line the air of chambers. Also the air flow moves everywere and push the flow of the machine to work and explore the electricity generator. Mostly, part are the chambers. Chambers also blow the water to air and create the energy. However, the chambers reach in new level the water. Conclude, the diagram show how waves turn out the electricity generator. The air that created is the most powerfull ingridient to success on this way of power.
The above draw analysis the process of wave-energy machine and their location.

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with the wave direction that push into machine and on their stage with procedure of how the water levels faction to reach the middle stage and to transform to
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air
. Second step of the generator are the waters levels that born the
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air
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flow
,
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air
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pick up in the turbine and
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to increase with rose line and
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dicrease
with green line the
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of chambers.

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air
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flow
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everywere
and push the
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of the machine to work and explore the electricity generator.
Mostly
, part are the chambers. Chambers
also
blow the water to
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air
and create the energy.
However
, the chambers reach in new level the water.

Conclude, the diagram
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how waves turn out the electricity generator. The
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air
that created is the most
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powerfull
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ingridient
to success on this way of power.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

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156 words
6.0
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