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The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday from 2003-2006. moDr

The bar chart gives information about the proportion of people who use the internet in five age categories between 2003 and 2006. Overall, it is clear that the highest percentages of using internet were owned by adults aged 16-24, while older people aged 65 and over had the lowest point over the period given. In the years 2003 and 2004, four-fifth of adults had connection to the internet and that number peaked at 100 percent in 2005. Following this, the percentage of internet users among adults declined to about 90 percent in 2006. The figure for the group, who was 25-44 years old, experienced a gradual increase from 45 percent in 2003 to 80 percent in 2006. There were similar decrease among the people aged 45-54, rising from 60 percent in 2003 to 80 percent in 2006. The number of users who was 55 – 64, witnessed minor fluctuations by around 30 percent in the years 2003, 2004 and 2005, yet reached 45 percent in 2006. The last group of net users had lowest position with under a fifth over the four-year schedule given.

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people
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use
 the internet in five age categories between 2003 and 2006. Overall
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clear
 that the highest percentages of using internet were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
 by adults aged 16-24, while older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 aged 65 and over had the lowest point over the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
.

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percent
 in 2005. Following this, the percentage of internet users among adults declined to about 90 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
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old
, experienced a gradual increase from 45 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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percent
 in 2006. There were similar decrease among the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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percent
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percent
 in 2006.

The number of users who was 55 – 64, witnessed minor fluctuations by around 30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 in the years 2003, 2004 and 2005, yet
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 in 2006. The last group of net users had A determiner is probably missing here: "the lowest".the lowest
lowest
 position with under a fifth over the four-year schedule This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
. 