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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams illustrate data on the process of designing a wave energy machine and give information about the options of how they are placed. Overall, in terms of the diagram below, this process involves 2 different chambers, a turbine, and an electricity generator to work correctly. In addition, the system requires waves and air flows. In the above diagram, two different options are located. Now this report will first describe the principles of designing a wave machine approach. One can obviously see that water enters the lower chamber along with the wave direction. When the water levels increase the air flows upwards to the upper chamber and releases to the atmosphere. Simultaneously, the air from the top goes through the upper chamber down to the bottom one. Air circulation is the key driver of the turbine movement, which produces electricity. A little information about a wave-energy machine, location alternatives shows, if the machine is installed far from the cost, it can generate higher output thanks to larger waves; however, the costs of installation are higher. On the contrary, a closer distance to the land means a lower production volume but being more cost-saving.
The diagrams illustrate data on the process of designing a
wave
energy
machine
and give information about the options of how they
are placed
.

Overall
, in terms of the diagram below, this process involves 2
different
chambers
, a turbine, and an electricity generator to work
correctly
.
In addition
, the system requires
waves
and
air
flows. In the above diagram, two
different
options
are located
.

Now
this report will
first
describe
the principles of designing a
wave
machine
approach. One can
obviously
see
that water enters the lower
chamber
along with the
wave
direction. When the water levels increase the
air
flows upwards to the upper
chamber
and releases to the atmosphere.
Simultaneously
, the
air
from the top goes through the upper
chamber
down to the bottom one.
Air
circulation is the key driver of the turbine movement, which produces electricity.

A
little
information about a wave-energy
machine
, location alternatives
shows
, if the
machine
is installed
far from the cost, it can generate higher output thanks to larger
waves
;
however
, the costs of installation are higher.
On the contrary
, a closer distance to the land means a lower production volume
but
being more cost-saving.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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