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People favourite type of coffee among Australia bar chart

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The bar chart underneath illustrates the out comes of a survey about people favorite drink (coffee and tea) buying and drinking which is consists of three main categories, fresh coffee, instant coffee and coffee or tea from the actual cafe, in the last 4 weeks, in five Australian cities, Sydney, Brisbane, Melbourne, Adelaide, and last but not least Hobart. Overall, Melbourne is considered the most city that its residents most likely to purchase all types of coffee against the other cities. In terms of buying the fresh coffee, Sydney and Melbourne is considered the most cities that prefers buying this type of coffee by a percentage of 40% and above, Hobart, Brisbane and Adelaide residents the fresh coffee buys it several times only and its not considered there main type of coffee by an average below 40% approximately. Instant coffee is considered a daily routine among the Australian society they buys it mostly in Hobart, Adelaide and Brisbane in high percent, nevertheless, there are various cities that do not prefer it like a coffee daily routine, for example, Sydney and Melbourne tend to drink it in small percent. Going to café is most frequently suggested in Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart by a major percent, while, in Adelaide and Brisbane residents doesn’t buys a great of deal in terms of buying this type of coffee.
The bar chart underneath illustrates the out
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people
favorite drink
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(coffee
and tea)
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buying
and drinking which is consists of three main categories, fresh
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coffee
, instant
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coffee
and
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coffee
or tea from the actual
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cafe
, in the last 4 weeks, in five Australian
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cities
, Sydney, Brisbane, Melbourne, Adelaide, and last
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not
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least
Hobart.

Overall
, Melbourne is
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considered
the most city that its residents most likely to
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purchase
all
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types
of
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coffee
against the other cities.

In terms of
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buying
the fresh
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coffee
, Sydney and Melbourne is
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considered
the most
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cities
that prefers
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buying
this
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type
of
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coffee
by a percentage of 40% and above, Hobart, Brisbane and Adelaide residents the fresh
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coffee
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buys
it several times
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only
and its not
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considered
there main
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type
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coffee
by an average below 40% approximately.

Instant
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coffee
is
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considered
a daily routine among the Australian society they
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buys
it
mostly
in Hobart, Adelaide and Brisbane in high percent,
nevertheless
, there are various
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cities
that do not prefer it like a
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coffee
daily routine,
for example
, Sydney and Melbourne tend to drink it in
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small
percent.

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buys
a great of deal in terms of
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buying
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coffee
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IELTS academic People favourite type of coffee among Australia bar chart

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