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Pie charts in the continents

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The six pie charts illustrate the proportion of the amount of water used for distinct purposes in certain continents, namely North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and SouthEast Asia. Overall, we can see that most areas spent water on agricultural aims whilst North America and Europe predominantly used water for their industries. Looking at the details, it was for agriculture purposes that water is mainly used in South America, Africa, Central Asia, SouthEast Asia with 71%, 84%, 88%, 81% respectively. Meanwhile, the highest water consumption for Industrial use was witnessed by North American (48%) and Europe (53%). With regards to water used for domestic use, it is obvious that North America, South America and Europe spend over 10% of their water for this purpose. By contrast, Africa, Central Asia and SouthEast Asia only consume water from 7% to 9%, which is seemingly far lower than the water consumed for agriculture. (152 words)
The six pie charts illustrate the proportion of the amount of
water
used
for distinct purposes in certain continents,
namely
North
America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and
SouthEast Asia
.

Overall
, we can
see
that most areas spent
water
on agricultural aims whilst
North
America and Europe
predominantly
used
water
for their industries.

Looking at the
details
, it was for agriculture purposes that
water
is
mainly
used
in South America, Africa, Central Asia,
SouthEast Asia
with 71%, 84%, 88%, 81%
respectively
. Meanwhile, the highest
water
consumption for Industrial
use
was witnessed
by
North
American (48%) and Europe (53%).

With regards to
water
used
for domestic
use
, it is obvious that
North
America, South America and Europe spend over 10% of their
water
for this purpose. By contrast, Africa, Central Asia and
SouthEast Asia
only
consume
water
from 7% to 9%, which is
seemingly
far lower than the
water
consumed for agriculture. (152 words)
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IELTS academic Pie charts in the continents

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
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