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The chart below shows the allocation of funds in the town budget of Greenboro.

The chart below shows the allocation of funds in the town budget of Greenboro. ELMwb
The pie chart illustrates how the allocation of money is distributing in four different categories into the rural area of Greenboro. Overall, money which distributed on school sector which is higher in three years. whereas, least funds allocated to the part and recreation. To begin with, last year allocated funds were divided into school and salaries area were spent similar as (30 %). Besides this, readers had allocated funds (25percent) which less than (10 %) was spent on part and recreation. In contrast, salaries and parts and recreation allocation of funds are allocated as similar as past. Apart from this, 5 % increases on the school. However, readers on spend funds is a decline and reach 20 %. However, in the next year of allocated funds were change in each sector of the town budget of Greenboro. In this year school and salaries, sectors budget of funds rise around 5 % and reach 40 % and 35 % respectively. In addition, readers of the allocated budget for next year was declined 5 %. lastly, a drastic drop of funds was analyzed in the parts and reservation.
The pie chart illustrates how the allocation of money is distributing in four
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different
categories into the rural area of
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Greenboro
.

Overall
, money which distributed on
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school
sector which is higher in three years.
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whereas
,
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least
funds
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allocated
to the
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part
and recreation.

To
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with, last
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year
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allocated
funds
were divided
into
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school
and salaries area
were spent
similar as (30 %).
Besides
this, readers had
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allocated
funds (25percent) which less than (10 %)
was spent
on
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part
and recreation.
In contrast
, salaries and
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parts
and recreation allocation of funds are
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allocated
as similar as past. Apart from this, 5 % increases on the
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school
.
However
, readers on spend funds is a decline and reach 20 %.

However
, in the
next
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year
of
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allocated
funds were
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change
in each sector of the town budget of
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Greenboro
. In this
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year
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school
and salaries, sectors budget of funds rise around 5 % and reach 40 % and 35 %
respectively
.
In addition
, readers of the
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allocated
budget for
next
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year
was declined
5 %.
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lastly
, a drastic drop of funds
was analyzed
in the
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parts
and reservation.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the allocation of funds in the town budget of Greenboro.

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