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The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. 7dmn
The set of map illustrates noticeable changes in the seaside town of Seaville, over a thirty-year period, from 1980 to 2010. In 1980, Seaville was small and contained fewer accommodating facilities such as holiday cottages and a small hotel. While, east bank was located in the far to the east side of the river. On the west-south coastline, there was holiday cottages situated throughout the road. Also, there was marsh to the east of cottages and woodland to the north. Apart from this, there was a tea room and sand dunes near the sea-beach. However, the village had grown drastically by 2010. Retirement villages had been built to the west of the main road. The marsh had been excluded and cottages demolished in order to construct permanent houses, although a hotel remained as it is to the north. Moreover, both a new high-rise hotel and holiday cottages on East bank had been constructed. The woodland area to the north had been converted into golf course by 2010. Overall, the village had undergone major development over the 30 year period. Both various infrastructure and new amenities had been built throughout the period.
The set of map illustrates noticeable
changes
in the seaside town of
Seaville
, over a thirty-year period, from 1980 to 2010.

In 1980,
Seaville
was
small
and contained fewer accommodating facilities such as holiday
cottages
and a
small
hotel.
While
, east bank
was located
in the far to the east side of the river. On the west-south coastline, there was holiday
cottages
situated throughout the road.
Also
, there was marsh to the east of
cottages
and woodland to the north. Apart from this, there was a tea room and sand dunes near the sea-beach.

However
, the village had grown
drastically
by 2010. Retirement villages had
been built
to the west of the main road. The marsh had
been excluded
and
cottages
demolished in order to construct permanent
houses
, although a hotel remained as it is to the north.
Moreover
, both a new high-rise hotel and holiday
cottages
on East bank had
been constructed
. The woodland area to the north had
been converted
into golf course by 2010.

Overall
, the village had undergone major development over the
30 year
period. Both various infrastructure and new amenities had
been built
throughout the period.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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