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The charts provide information about students in 2007 who were happy with different facilities at a university of UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie chart depicts information about the pupils who were happy with three specific facilities at a university UK in 2007. The given three facilities are the schoolrooms at university, university cafeteria and school facilities. Both undergraduate and graduate had similar feelings regarding the school accommodation facility at university. Nearly about 65 per cent of both were extremely satisfied, nearly about 25 per cent were not satisfied and nearly about 13 per cent were average satisfied. The major difference was observed regarding the university cafeteria between undergraduate and postgraduate. Nearly about 3/4 of post postgraduates were very satisfied with the facility of the university cafeteria while nearly about half undergraduates were very satisfied. 26 per cent and 22 per cent of undergraduates were not satisfied and satisfied, respectively and 11 per cent and 16 per cent of postgraduates were not satisfied and quite satisfied, respectively. The most number (85%) of undergraduates were extremely satisfied with the school facilities whereas less than half (43%) postgraduates were very satisfied. 14 per cent of undergraduates were quite satisfied with the school facilities while only 1 per cent were not satisfied. Nearly about quarter postgraduates were not satisfied and almost 32 per cent were quite satisfied with the school facilities. overall, the maximum number of undergraduates are satisfied with the school facilities while the maximum number of postgraduate are satisfied with the facility of the university cafeteria.
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pie chart depicts information about the pupils who were happy with three specific facilities at a
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university
UK in 2007. The
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three facilities are the schoolrooms at
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university
,
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university
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cafeteria
and
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school
facilities.

Both
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undergraduate
and graduate had similar feelings regarding the
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school
accommodation facility at
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university
.
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about 65 per cent of both were
extremely
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satisfied
,
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nearly
about 25 per cent were not
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satisfied
and
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nearly
about 13 per cent were average satisfied.

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was observed
regarding the
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university
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cafeteria
between
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and
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postgraduate
.
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about 3/4 of post
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postgraduates
were
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very
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satisfied
with the facility of the
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university
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cafeteria
while
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about half
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undergraduates
were
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satisfied
. 26 per cent and 22 per cent of
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undergraduates
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were
not
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and
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,
respectively
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postgraduates
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were
not
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and quite
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,
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were
extremely
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satisfied
with the
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school
facilities whereas less than half (43%)
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postgraduates
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. 14 per cent of
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were
quite
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about quarter
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postgraduates
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satisfied
and almost 32 per cent were quite
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satisfied
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facilities.

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overall
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undergraduates
are
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school
facilities while the maximum number of
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postgraduate
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satisfied
with the facility of the
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university
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cafeteria
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IELTS academic The charts provide information about students in 2007 who were happy with different facilities at a university of UK.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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