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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. 070Q
The graph and table given summarise the population trend and the percentage of the population aged over 65 years in Japan. The graph depicts the population trend between the years 1950-2055 (i. e. past, present, and future). We can see that the population in Japan was 8. 1 million in the year 1950, which is the least ever recorded between the years 1950-2055. From the years 1951-1965, the population trend is less than 100 million and ranges between 90-99. 2million. The graph shows the consistent population growth between the years 1951-2005. The population was consistently growing and recorded as 127. 8 million in the year 2005 which is the highest ever recorded. We can see a slight decline in the population from 2001-2055, the population dropped from 128. 8 million in 2005 to 89. 9 million in the year 2055. The table shows the data about the population who are aged about 65 years. In the year 1950, Japan was having 4. 1 million people who are aged above 65 years, which was 4. 9% of the total population. Which is the least ever recorded. In the year 2055, Japan will have 36. 5 million people who are aged above 65 years. Which is 41% of the total population. This is the highest ever recorded in Japan having many elder people in the population who arec aged above 65 years.
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aged
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Japan
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trend between the years 1950-2055 (
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in
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Japan
was 8. 1
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million
in the
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1950, which is the least
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recorded
between the years 1950-2055. From the years 1951-1965, the
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trend is less than 100
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million
and ranges between 90-99.
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2million
. The graph
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the consistent
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growth between the years 1951-2005. The
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was
consistently
growing and
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as 127. 8
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2005 which is the highest
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. We can
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a slight decline in the
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from 2001-2055, the
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dropped from 128. 8
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million
in 2005 to 89. 9
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in the
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2055.

The table
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the data about the
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are
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about 65 years. In the
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1950,
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was having 4. 1
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above 65 years, which was 4. 9% of the total
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. In the
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will have 36. 5
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IELTS academic The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

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