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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village. » You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village. » OaNk
The given diagram explains the population development of Chorleywood village since the mid of nineteenth century. Overall, the majority of population has increased in east and south side of the village and there were three types of road ways developed in the mid of 19th century in Chorleywood. According to the diagram, it accounted for less population (1868-1883) in the center of village which was near to the Chorleywood park and GOH course and there were the only one main road in the village towards south-west to north-west. The motor way constructed in the east of the village in 1970, which increases the population in the east of Chorleywood from 1970 to 1994 and this development connected the motor way and main roads. Secondly, railway build in the year of 1909 in the south-west corner of the village and also has railway station along the same direction of Chorleywood. There was a measurable population increased in the east and west of the railway station from 1922 to 1970. This railway system connected people who from east and west of Chorleywood village.
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Chorleywood
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since the mid of nineteenth century.

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, the majority of
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population
has increased in east and south side of the
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village
and there were three types of road ways developed in the mid of 19th century in
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Chorleywood
.

According to the diagram, it accounted for less
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population
(1868-1883) in the center of
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village
which was near to the
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park and
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GOH
course and there were the
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only
one main road in the
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towards south-west to north-west. The motor way constructed in the east of the
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village
in 1970, which increases the
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population
in the east of
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Chorleywood
from 1970 to 1994 and this development connected the motor way and main roads.

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,
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railway
build in the year of 1909 in the south-west corner of the
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village
and
also
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station along the same direction of
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Chorleywood
. There was a measurable
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population
increased in the east and west of the
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railway
station from 1922 to 1970. This
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system connected
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people
who from east and west of
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Chorleywood
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IELTS academic Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village. »

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