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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 0d9G

There are three figures showing some structural changes that Secondary School since it was built in the fifties. In 1950 the education center had just the main building and a playground for kids. The side spaces were allocated to farmland and houses, and it was the year with the shortest school's territory. Thirty years later it got expanded, not just in space, but also in facilities for students. A new science block was built next to a car park, taking place on the previous houses complex. Also, a sports field was set up. Finally, in the third year presented, the field of West Park School kept the same but distribution changed. Car parks took more relevance so sports field got reduced, as well as the playground. It is important to noticed that the main building did not changed along the years.

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some
 structural This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 that Secondary School since it was built
 in the fifties.

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just
 the main building and a playground for kids. The side spaces were allocated
 to farmland and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, and it was the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 with the shortest school's territory.

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got
 expanded, not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 in space, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 in facilities for students. A new science block was built
next
 to a car park, taking place on the previous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 complex. Also
, a sports field was set
 up.

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, in the third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 presented, the field of West Park School This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
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but
 distribution This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
. Car parks took more relevance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sports field This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
, as well
 as the playground. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to noticed that the main building did not The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "change"change
changed
 along the years. 