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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. KMa0
The given line graph illustrates the exportion of wheat over three different countries from 1985 to 1990. In, 1985 Australia exported almost 15 millions of tonnes of wheat; while, this figure increased slightly and stood at 16 million in 1986. After that this ratio decreased gradually from 14 millons of tonnes in 1987 to 11 millons of tonnes in 1990. Over the same period, around 19 millons of tonnes of wheat was exported by canada in 1985; whereas this value fell significantly in following year. However, there was a rapid growth in exportion of wheat in 1988 by 25 millons of tonnes. In addtion, in 1990, it stood at 19 millons of tonnes. About European community, it started from 17 millons of tonnes in 1985; while, the figure of wheat exportion was increased and accounted at 21 millons of tonnesin 1990. Overall, it can be seen that Australia exported the least amount of wheat; whereas, European community exported the highest amount of wheat in given period of time between 1985 to 1990.
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wheat
over three
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countries from 1985 to 1990.

In, 1985 Australia
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exported
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tonnes of
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wheat
; while, this figure increased
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millons
of tonnes in 1987 to 11
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millons
of tonnes in 1990.

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millons
of tonnes of
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wheat
was
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exported
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canada
in 1985; whereas this value fell
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in following year.
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, there was a rapid growth in
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exportion
of
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wheat
in 1988 by 25
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millons
of tonnes. In
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addtion
, in 1990, it stood at 19
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millons
of tonnes. About European community, it
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started
from 17
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millons
of tonnes in 1985; while, the figure of
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wheat
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exportion
was increased
and accounted at 21
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millons
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tonnesin
1990.

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, it can be
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seen
that Australia
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exported
the least amount of
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wheat
; whereas, European community
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exported
the highest amount of
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wheat
in
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given
period of time
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between 1985 to 1990
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