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The diagrams below show coffee production using the dry method and roasted coffee oil extraction by mechanical expelling. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagrams below show coffee production using the dry method and roasted coffee oil extraction by mechanical expelling. j5b6M
The flow charts demonstratre how the coffee produced by two ways, namely dry method and extract roasted coffee oil by mechanical expelling. It is clear from the diagram that there are 9 stages in parched situation which begin with collecting well-qualified beans by hands and end with packaging the product. Meanwhile, getting oil of grilled coffee start with roasting and end at filter step. Reagarding the dry production of coffee, the refined coffee is harvested and sieve to eliminate the dregs. Then, it takes 4 weeks to dry in sun. After a complete bask, coffee is racked and turned before being stored in silo. Afterwards, it is sent to mill and hulled before grading the quality. Finally, the coffee will be packaged into bags. Turning to the roasted coffee oil extraction, the green coffee is initially roasted in a reoaster chamber and subsequently moved to another cabinet by an elevator. Futhermore, it is put into a heating system where the steam is removed. Next, the condensed is moved to a press oil extractor to produce crude oil and the coffee dregs is ejected. At the end of the process, crude oil goes through the filter to get the final product which is called coffee oil.
The flow charts
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demonstratre
how the
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coffee
produced by two ways,
namely
dry method and extract roasted
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coffee
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oil
by mechanical expelling.

It is
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clear
from the diagram that there are 9 stages in parched situation which
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begin
with collecting well-qualified beans by hands and
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end
with packaging the product. Meanwhile, getting
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oil
of grilled
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coffee
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start
with roasting and
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end
at filter step.

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Reagarding
the dry production of
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coffee
, the refined
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coffee
is harvested
and sieve to eliminate the dregs. Then, it takes 4 weeks to dry in sun. After a complete bask,
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coffee
is racked
and turned
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before
being stored
in silo. Afterwards, it is
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sent
to mill and hulled
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before
grading the quality.
Finally
, the
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coffee
will
be packaged
into bags.

Turning to the roasted
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coffee
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oil
extraction, the green
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coffee
is
initially
roasted in a
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reoaster
chamber and
subsequently
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moved
to another cabinet by an elevator.
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Futhermore
, it
is put
into a heating system where the steam
is removed
.
Next
, the condensed is
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moved
to a press
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oil
extractor to produce crude
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oil
and the
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coffee
dregs
is ejected
. At the
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end
of the process, crude
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oil
goes through the filter to
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get
the final product which
is called
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coffee
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oil
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show coffee production using the dry method and roasted coffee oil extraction by mechanical expelling.

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6.0
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