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The chart below gives information about the use of television in a country in every second quarter of the years 2017-2020.The data are presented in percertage Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevanit.

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The chat delineates the proportion of television use of viewers in a certain nation on the quarterly basis over a course of 4 years commencing from 2017.  Overall, it can be seen that the total use of television (TUT) showed a general upward trend although there was some downward movement in the middle. Besides, the figure for people who used television proved itself to be significantly higher than that for people who preferred using TV connected devices during the surveyed period.  The year 2017 witnessed the highest number of people watching television, with 17% as opposed to 3% of those who opted for TV connected devices. One year later, whereas the percentage of TV viewers dropped mildly to 16. 4%, that of users of TV connected devices rose slightly to 3. 4%. Generally, the total use of television from 2017 to 2018 decreased negligibly from 20% to 19. 8%.  In 2019, the downward trend to 15. 2% was still seen in the percentage of TV viewers while its counterparts still witnessed a steady rise to 3. 8%. However, the year 2020 did record the highest percentage of TV total use from people, with 21%, in which the figure for those who opted for TV connected devices made up to 5. 6%.
The chat delineates the proportion of
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of viewers in a certain nation on the quarterly basis over a course of 4 years commencing from 2017.  
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during the surveyed period.  The
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from 2017 to 2018 decreased
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in the percentage of TV viewers while its counterparts
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2020 did record the highest percentage of TV total
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, with 21%, in which the figure for those
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made up to 5. 6%.

IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the use of television in a country in every second quarter of the years 2017-2020. The data are presented in percertage Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevanit.

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