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Expend in three countries

Expend in three countries pJ1x2

The given table gives information about consumer expending in 5 countries over the year. It sees clearly that turkey came first country that spent 32. 14% in food, drinks and tobacco, meanwhile Ireland did not go away far from Turkish that expended around 29%. The remained countries separate three places, that in the third place stayed Spain, after Italy and in the last place was Sweden with 32. 14%. Clothing and foot wear had another situation, where the biggest expending was in Italy with 9%. In second stayed 3 countries that had approximately 6. 5%, it was Turkey, Spain and Ireland, but Sweden had the smallest spending which was 5. 40%. In leisure and education sphere countries spent the negligible amount of money. As it can be observed Turkey’s consumers spent 32% in food and also spend nearly 4. 5%, drinks and tobacco, in clothes and footwear Italy’s consumers expend 9%

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 table gives information about consumer expending in 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 over the year.

It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnesses
sees
clearly
 that turkey came first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 that spent 32. 14% in food, drinks and tobacco, meanwhile Ireland did not go away far from Turkish that expended around 29%. The remained You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 separate three places, that in the third place stayed Spain, after Italy and in the last place was Sweden with 32. 14%.

Clothing and foot wear had another situation, where the biggest expending was in Italy with 9%. In second stayed 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 that had approximately 6. 5%, it was Turkey, Spain and Ireland, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 Sweden had the smallest spending which was 5. 40%.

In leisure and education sphere You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 spent the negligible amount of money.

As it can be observed
 Turkey’s consumers spent 32% in food and also
 spend nearly
 4. 5%, drinks and tobacco, in clothes and footwear Italy’s consumers expend 9%