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The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the FRENTON FROM 1990 TO 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes that have taken place in the FRENTON FROM 1990 TO 2012. paB7y
THE GIVEN MAPS COMPARES THE DIFFERENCES OCCURS IN FRENTON IN THE PERIOD OF 22 YEAR FROM 1990 TO 2012. OVERALL, HIGH STREETS MOVE TOWARD WEST SIDE AS THE WEST OF FRENTON EXPANDED. THE STRUCTURE ENLARGED DRASCTICALLY IN SIZE. THE BANK ARE DEMOLISHED AS RESTAURANT IS INTRODUCED IN PLACE OF BANKS. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, SCHOOL AND LIBRARY REMAIN CONSTANT OVER THE TIME PERIOD. IN NORTH SIDE PLAYING FIELDS WITH TREES IS REPLACED BY BLOCK OF FLATS 2012. THE HOSPITAL BUILDING SHOW THE CONSTRUCTIVE DEVELOPMENT AS THE SIZE DOUBLED FROM PREVIOUS PLAN. THE BANK IN NORTH-EAST SIDE DEMOLISHED IN AND RESTAURANT IS CONSTRUCTED IN THAT AREA. THE TECHNOPARK TAKE PLACE OF TREES IN NEWLY PREPARED PLAN OF FRENTON 1912. AS FAR AS WEST IS CONCERNED, DUE TO THE ACT OF MAJOR DEVELOPMENT OF EAST SIDE THE HIGH STREET SHIFT TOWARD TO WEST. THE FLATS IN NORTH IF VILLAGE ARE REMOVED WHEREAS, SHOPS IN SOUTH ARE RECONTRUCTED WITH THE NAME OF SUPERMARKETS. THE THEATRE AND CAFE PARK IS RENAMED AS CINEMA AND GOLF COURSE RESPECTIVELY.
THE
GIVEN
MAPS COMPARES THE DIFFERENCES OCCURS IN
FRENTON
IN THE PERIOD OF 22 YEAR FROM 1990 TO 2012.

OVERALL
, HIGH STREETS
MOVE
TOWARD WEST SIDE AS THE WEST OF
FRENTON
EXPANDED. THE STRUCTURE ENLARGED
DRASCTICALLY
IN SIZE. THE BANK
ARE
DEMOLISHED AS RESTAURANT
IS INTRODUCED
IN PLACE OF BANKS.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, SCHOOL AND LIBRARY REMAIN CONSTANT OVER THE TIME PERIOD. IN NORTH SIDE PLAYING FIELDS WITH TREES
IS REPLACED
BY BLOCK OF FLATS 2012. THE HOSPITAL BUILDING
SHOW
THE CONSTRUCTIVE DEVELOPMENT AS THE SIZE DOUBLED FROM PREVIOUS PLAN. THE BANK IN NORTH-EAST SIDE DEMOLISHED IN AND RESTAURANT
IS CONSTRUCTED
IN THAT AREA.
THE
TECHNOPARK
TAKE PLACE OF TREES IN
NEWLY
PREPARED PLAN OF
FRENTON
1912.

AS FAR AS WEST
IS CONCERNED
, DUE TO THE ACT OF MAJOR DEVELOPMENT OF EAST SIDE THE HIGH STREET SHIFT TOWARD TO WEST. THE FLATS IN NORTH IF VILLAGE
ARE REMOVED
WHEREAS, SHOPS IN SOUTH ARE
RECONTRUCTED
WITH THE NAME OF SUPERMARKETS. THE
THEATRE
AND
CAFE
PARK
IS RENAMED
AS CINEMA AND GOLF COURSE
RESPECTIVELY
.
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