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Below is a chart showing how many hours per week the average person spent on various kinds of media, including watching TV, surfing on the Internet, listening to the radio, and reading printed material. The years covered are from 1990 to 2005.

Below is a chart showing how many hours per week the average person spent on various kinds of media, including watching TV, surfing on the Internet, listening to the radio, and reading printed material. The years covered are from 1990 to 2005. dorKP
The line chart compares the various kinds of media to the hours spent by an average person per week from 1990-1995. We can see that from the statistics that's been shown we are comparing four kinds of media: television, internet, radio, and printed material. Both hours spent on television and printed material saw it decline for the past 15 years. Even though printed material seemed to start its the decline in between 1995-2000, the trend from 2000-2005 was somewhat unpredictable unlike television media whose trend continued to be in a downslope in between 1995-2000 and reaching its lowest level in 2005. The time spent on radio and the internet showed the opposite trend from television and printed material as radio has seen steady growth for the past 15 years albeit a minimal one. Meanwhile, hours spent on the internet saw a surge in hours spent after 2000 showing its popularity with people. Overall, the emergence of the internet continued to be the most popular of all forms of media amongst people in the 21st century, while time spent on other forms of media continued to either decline or has not seen much change in the past years.
The line chart compares the various kinds of
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by an average person per week from 1990-1995. We can
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that from the statistics that's
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we are comparing four kinds of
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:
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television
, internet, radio, and
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printed
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material
. Both
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on
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it decline for the past 15 years.

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printed
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seemed to
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the decline in between 1995-2000, the trend from 2000-2005 was somewhat unpredictable unlike
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television
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media
whose trend continued to be in a
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downslope
in between 1995-2000 and reaching its lowest level in 2005. The time
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spent
on radio and the internet
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the opposite trend from
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and
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printed
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as radio has
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steady growth for the past 15 years albeit a minimal one. Meanwhile,
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on the internet
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a surge in
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after 2000 showing its popularity with
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people
.

Overall
, the emergence of the internet continued to be the most popular of all forms of
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amongst
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people
in the 21st century, while time
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on other forms of
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continued to either decline or has not
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seen
much
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in the past years.
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IELTS academic Below is a chart showing how many hours per week the average person spent on various kinds of media, including watching TV, surfing on the Internet, listening to the radio, and reading printed material. The years covered are from 1990 to 2005.

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