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Line graph illustrates complaints about noise

Line graph illustrates complaints about noise E7LBM
The line graph illustrates the number of petitions made about noise to environmental health authorities in the city of newton between 1980 and 1996. Overall, road works went up then 4 other alternatives while the top alternative domestic/household became the least over 16 year period. Roadworks and traffic noise show a similar pattern if there were differences of 200 complaints. With regards road work it was steady from 1980 to 1984 and started fluctuations and tailing off at almost 1250 in 1996. Even though the number of complaints about traffic was least from 1980 to 1988, it ended at 600 by placed 3rd position. Conversely, complaints about domestic/ household residential were 600 complaints in the year 1980 in Newtown and it declined to 100 in 1996. By contrast, factories show an upward trend from 400 to 600 approximately in 1996 despite slight fluctuations.
The line graph illustrates the number of petitions made about noise to environmental health authorities in the city of newton between 1980 and 1996.

Overall
, road works went up then 4 other alternatives while the top alternative domestic/household became the least over
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16 year
period.

Roadworks and traffic noise
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a similar pattern if there were differences of 200
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complaints
. With regards road work it was steady from 1980 to 1984 and
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started
fluctuations and tailing off at almost 1250 in 1996.
Even though
the number of
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complaints
about traffic was least from 1980 to 1988, it ended at 600 by placed 3rd position.

Conversely
,
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complaints
about domestic/ household residential were 600
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complaints
in the year 1980 in
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Newtown
and it declined to 100 in 1996. By contrast, factories
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show
an upward trend from 400 to 600 approximately in 1996 despite slight fluctuations.
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IELTS academic Line graph illustrates complaints about noise

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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