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The diagram shows the steps procedure involved in production of cement and concrete.

The diagram shows the steps procedure involved in production of cement and concrete. JK7Ej

The picture depicts the step by step involved in production of cement and concrete. In detailed view, limestone and clay crushed in the crusher to obtain the powder. After that, powder is put into the mixer and mixer is heated by rotating heater and external heat provide to absorb the moisture. In the next stage, it is transfer into the grinder to get fine quality cement. finally, cement is packed and it is ready for commercial use. Probing further, four materials are involved to manufacture of concrete. cement mixed 15%. Then, these four materials are put into the concrete mixture to get concrete. Overall, six stages are include in production of cement and five steps are involved in manufacturing of concrete.

The picture depicts the step by step involved in production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and concrete. In detailed view, limestone and clay crushed in the crusher to obtain the powder. After that, powder is put
 into the mixer and mixer is heated
 by rotating heater and external heat provide to absorb the moisture. In the next
 stage, it is transfer into the grinder to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 fine quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFinally
finally
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
is packed
 and it is ready for commercial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. Probing further
, four materials are involved
 to manufacture of concrete. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCement
cement
 mixed 15%. Then, these four materials are put
 into the concrete mixture to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 concrete. Overall
, six stages are Consider using a past participle here: "included".included
include
 in production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and five steps are involved
 in manufacturing of concrete. 