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The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer. xkab
The diagram above illustrates the production and transportation process of natural gas to its users. First, natural gas is extracted from many gas wells. Then, it is processed in the gas processing station to be used. Afterwards, transportations are needed to distribute the usable gas to many consumers. Of all the consumers, there are two main ones. One of which is gas station. They provide fuel for different vehicle like cars, trucks, . . . Second is to distribute to gas supply station. These are two ways for gas to become available to everyone. Both are different due to ranges and demographic. From then on, gas appliances use the supply stations with either pipeline network or non-piped gas tanks. These are the overall process of natural gas distribution and transportation.
The diagram above illustrates the production and transportation process of natural
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to its users.

First
, natural
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gas
is extracted
from
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many
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gas
wells. Then, it
is processed
in the
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gas
processing
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station
to be
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used
. Afterwards, transportations
are needed
to distribute the usable
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gas
to
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many
consumers. Of all the consumers, there are two main ones.

One of which is
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gas
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station
. They provide fuel for
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different
vehicle like cars, trucks
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Second is to distribute to
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gas
supply
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station
. These are two ways for
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gas
to become available to everyone. Both are
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different
due to ranges and demographic.

From then on,
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gas
appliances
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use
the supply
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stations
with either pipeline network or non-piped
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gas
tanks.

These are the
overall
process of natural
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distribution and transportation.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

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