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The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro

The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro LRbn

The line chart illustrates the average price of monthly plans from four cell phone contractors in a European nation in the first three quarters of 2002. Overall, the was an increase in the figures for all companies, except for Sim TX. Additionally, the monthly cost of Alpha's contract showed a dramatic increase over the period. In January 2002, Domo's contract offered the highest price, at about 15 euros per month. The price increased gradually till July, followed by a slight decrease to 23 euros in September. In contrast, Alpha's user had paid only 5 euros in January, which remain stable for the five subsequent months, before a sudden rose to 25 euros at the end of the period. On the other hand, after peaking at 14 euros in June, the average cost of Sim TX decreased and returned to its original price of 8 euros. However, Lex's contract offered approximately 12 euros in January and rose to 17 euros in September.

The line chart illustrates the average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
 of monthly plans from four cell phone contractors in a European nation in the first
 three quarters of 2002.

Overall
, Please check whether a word is missing between 'the' and 'was' or whether 'the' is the correct determiner.
the
 was an increase in the figures for all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 Sim TX. Additionally
, the monthly cost of Alpha's contract This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a dramatic increase over the period.

In January 2002, Possible spelling mistake found.DemoDomeDoomComoDodoDMO
Domo
's contract offered the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
, at about 15 euros per month. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
 increased gradually
 till July, followed by a slight decrease to 23 euros in September. In contrast
, Alpha's user had paid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 5 euros in January, which remain stable for the five subsequent months, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 a sudden rose to 25 euros at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period.

On the other hand
, after peaking at 14 euros in June, the average cost of Sim TX decreased and returned to its original You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
price
 of 8 euros. However
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Lex
's contract offered approximately 12 euros in January and rose to 17 euros in September. 