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The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009. rBJn
The bar chart illustrates, the attendance at entertainment venue, whereas table gives information about the admission price of different event organized in these venue in 2009. Overall, when we compare, it is evident that maximum people attended cinema, while number of admission to theme parks and sports are less. Additionally, price for cinema is lowest than all other events. Firstly, the cost of cinema ticket for one person is $15 and for family of four it is $55, which is the lowest priced event, and thus substantially higher number of people participated, that is more than 1000. Furthermore, the price for theme park is $70 and $210 for single person and family. Around 350 individuals visited in theme park. Finally, merely less than 200 spectators were present to watch sports, as the tickets were very expensive. Tickets for various football games, for single person range from $71 to $75 and for families it is between $280 and $290. However, tickets for basketball and cricket were less. Besides individual has to pay $34 and $24, on the other hand, for family it is $135 and $55 respectively.
The bar chart illustrates, the attendance at entertainment venue, whereas table gives information about the admission price of
different
event
organized in
these venue
in 2009.

Overall
, when we compare, it is evident that maximum
people
attended cinema, while number of admission to theme parks and sports are less.
Additionally
, price for cinema is
lowest
than all other
events
.

Firstly
, the cost of cinema
ticket
for one person is $15 and for
family
of four it is $55, which is the lowest priced
event
, and
thus
substantially
higher number of
people
participated,
that is
more than 1000.
Furthermore
, the price for theme park is $70 and $210 for single person and
family
. Around 350 individuals visited in theme park.

Finally
,
merely
less than 200 spectators were present to
watch
sports, as the
tickets
were
very
expensive.
Tickets
for various football games, for single person range from $71 to $75 and for
families
it is between $280 and $290.
However
,
tickets
for basketball and cricket were less.
Besides
individual
has to
pay $34 and $24,
on the other hand
, for
family
it is $135 and $55
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.

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