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The diagram shows the production of olive oil.

The diagram shows the production of olive oil. jRdmy
The given diagram illustrated the process of manufacturing the olive oil in seven different steps. The process start with gathering the olives from trees by a person in bucket. In the second step, these olives are rinsed in cold water for cleaning. Afterthat, they are taken through belt for smashing, where the olive stones are separated from the paste by smashed on it. Then, they are poured in the bag which has holes. Next, before reaching for the separation process, the paste is passed through pressing process which produce water and oil. This oil is separated by removing water from it in sixth stage. Finally, oil is ready for storage in small bottles for selling in the market. Overall, the process initiate with collecting the olives from trees by hand picking and end with the storage of oil in bottles to sale. Moreover, machineries play crucial role to lead the process conveniently.
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of manufacturing the olive
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oil
in seven
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different
steps. The
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process
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start
with gathering the
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olives
from trees by a person in bucket. In the second step, these
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olives
are rinsed
in
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cold
water for cleaning.
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Afterthat
, they
are taken
through belt for smashing, where the olive stones
are separated
from the paste by smashed on it. Then, they
are poured
in the bag which has holes.
Next
,
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before
reaching for the separation
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process
, the paste
is passed
through pressing
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process
which produce water and
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oil
. This
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oil
is separated
by removing water from it in sixth stage.
Finally
,
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oil
is ready for storage in
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small
bottles for selling in the market.
Overall
, the
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process
initiate with collecting the
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olives
from trees by
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hand picking
and
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end
with the storage of
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oil
in bottles to sale.
Moreover
,
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machineries
play crucial role to lead the
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process
conveniently
.
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