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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the production of circuit boards. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The flowchart depicts circuit boards production. It allows flow in nine stages. Beginning from delivery of circuit board material and ending with delivery to factories. Firstly, the process begins with delivery of circuit board material moving ahead with the steps secondly, cutting and spraying with fire retardant. Then, cleaning is done of the circuit board. Thirdly, the automated IC attachment and soldering is arranged for circuit board. Thereafter, visual inspection and quality control testing is done by a person. The chips from rejected boards are thrown away and the selected goods are sent for final testing. If the product gets rejected in the final testing then a circular motion is followed which continues again from the third step, (automated IC attachment and soldering) till the final testing. After final testing the product is sent for packaging and finally it is delivered to the factories. Hence, the first three steps flow in straight line followed by, a circular flow in between if the products get rejected and then continuing to flow in straight line which is downward flowing.
The flowchart depicts
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circuit
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boards
production. It
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allows
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flow
in nine stages. Beginning from delivery of
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circuit
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board
material and ending with delivery to factories.

Firstly
, the process
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begins
with delivery of
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circuit
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board
material moving ahead with the steps
secondly
, cutting and spraying with fire retardant. Then, cleaning
is done
of the
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circuit
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board
.
Thirdly
, the automated IC attachment and soldering
is arranged
for
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circuit
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board
. Thereafter, visual inspection and quality control
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testing
is done
by a person. The chips from rejected
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boards
are thrown
away and the selected
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goods
are
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sent
for
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final
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testing
. If the product
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gets
rejected in the
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final
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testing
then a circular motion
is followed
which continues again from the third step, (automated IC attachment and soldering) till the
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final
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testing
. After
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final
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testing
the product is
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sent
for packaging and
finally
it
is delivered
to the factories.

Hence
, the
first
three steps
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flow
in straight line followed by, a circular
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flow
in between if the products
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get
rejected and then continuing to
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flow
in straight line which is downward flowing.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the production of circuit boards.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
177 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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