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comparison of the British’s expenditure on convenience food weekly and food consumption such as fish and chips, hamburgers, and pizza between 1970 and 1990 in Britain.

The Bar chart illustrates a comparison of the British’s expenditure on convenience food weekly from high-income, average-income, and low-income groups. The line graph also depicts food consumption such as fish and chips, hamburgers, and pizza between 1970 and 1990 in Britain. Overall, wealthy people in Britain had been more interested in junk food than poor people, and hamburgers had become the most favorite junk food over the period 1990. According to the bar chart, the trends had shown hamburgers was the most tantalizing food for two groups, namely high-income and average-income people who put expenditure 40 and 33 pence, relatively. On the other hand, fish and chips had various money spending, which average-income had stood on the highest level that used 25 pence weekly, followed by high income (18 pence) for those kinds of junk-food. Even though fish and chips were preferable for low-income which had spent 18 pence weekly, compare with other junk food, which spent only 13 pence for hamburgers and 8 pence for pizza. Meanwhile, high-income groups had chosen pizza where they spent more money, about 19 pence weekly, compared with an average income group of 12 pence and low-income group 8 pence per week. In the meantime, the line graph depicts the consumption of British people on convenience food from 1970 to 1990. Hamburger and pizza consumption had a trend remarkably increasing gradually year by year between 1970 and 1990 above 500 grams for hamburgers and more than 250 grams for pizza. It had compared with fish and chips, which had fluctuated graphics. It started on 300 grammes in 1970. It was the highest amount of junk food consumption by British people in 1970, then plummeted significantly to 200 grammes in 1985 and increased a few to 210 grams in 1990.
The Bar chart illustrates a comparison of the British’s expenditure on convenience
food
weekly
from high-income, average-income, and low-income
groups
. The line graph
also
depicts
food
consumption
such as fish and chips, hamburgers, and pizza between 1970 and 1990 in Britain.

Overall
, wealthy
people
in Britain had been more interested in
junk
food
than poor
people
, and hamburgers had become the most favorite
junk
food
over the period 1990.

According to the bar chart, the trends had shown hamburgers was the most tantalizing
food
for two
groups
,
namely
high-income and average-income
people
who put expenditure 40 and 33 pence,
relatively
.
On the other hand
, fish and chips had various money spending, which average-income had stood on the highest level that
used
25 pence
weekly
, followed by high income (18 pence) for those kinds of junk-food.
Even though
fish and chips were preferable for low-income which had spent 18 pence
weekly
, compare with other
junk
food
, which spent
only
13 pence for hamburgers and 8 pence for pizza. Meanwhile, high-income
groups
had chosen pizza where they spent more money, about 19 pence
weekly
, compared with an average income
group
of 12 pence and low-income
group
8 pence per week.

In the meantime, the line graph depicts the
consumption
of British
people
on convenience
food
from 1970 to 1990. Hamburger and pizza
consumption
had a trend
remarkably
increasing
gradually
year by year between 1970 and 1990 above 500 grams for hamburgers and more than 250 grams for pizza. It had compared with fish and chips, which had fluctuated graphics. It
started
on 300
grammes
in 1970.
It
was the highest amount of
junk
food
consumption
by British
people
in 1970, then plummeted
significantly
to 200
grammes
in 1985 and increased a few to 210 grams in 1990.
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IELTS academic comparison of the British’s expenditure on convenience food weekly and food consumption such as fish and chips, hamburgers, and pizza between 1970 and 1990 in Britain.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
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