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The table compares actual and predicted figures for populations in three different cities

The table compares actual and predicted figures for populations in three different cities gWA5g

The given table provides comparison for forecasted figures for inhabitants with genuine numbers among three countries namely Sao Paulo, Jakarta and Shanghai over a 10-year-period starting from 1990. In general, it is clearly depicted that the actual numbers in 1990 among the listed were below the the number of that in 2000. Predicted populations in 2000 were so much higher than the citizens in three countries. In 1990, figures for populations of Sao Paulo and Jakarta were 15 and 9. 5, respectively. They were so much higher in 2000 while the number in Shanghai of 2000 was lower than the actual number in 1990 (13. 5), with only 12. 5 million people. Looking at the chart, the predicted number of Shanghai was the highest but in fact, there was only 18 million people in 2000. The estimated figures in Jakarta and Shanghai were much higher than the figures for citizens, 14 and 17 million compared to 11. 5 and 12. 5 million.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 table provides comparison for forecasted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figures
 for inhabitants with genuine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 among three countries namely
'Sao Paulo' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "São Paulo"São Paulo
Sao Paulo
, Jakarta and Shanghai over a 10-year-period starting from 1990.

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, it is clearly
 depicted that the actual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 in 1990 among the listed were below Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
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number
 of that in 2000. Predicted populations in 2000 were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much higher than the citizens in three countries.

In 1990, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figures
 for populations of 'Sao Paulo' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "São Paulo"São Paulo
Sao Paulo
 and Jakarta were 15 and 9. 5, respectively
. They were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much higher in 2000 while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 in Shanghai of 2000 was lower than the actual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 in 1990 (13. 5), with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 12. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
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people
.

Looking at the chart, the predicted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Shanghai was the highest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in fact, there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 18 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in 2000. The estimated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figures
 in Jakarta and Shanghai were much higher than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpricecharacterratenumbersymbolamount
figures
 for citizens, 14 and 17 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 compared to 11. 5 and 12. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. 