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The table compares actual and predicted figures for populations in three different cities

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The given table provides comparison for forecasted figures for inhabitants with genuine numbers among three countries namely Sao Paulo, Jakarta and Shanghai over a 10-year-period starting from 1990. In general, it is clearly depicted that the actual numbers in 1990 among the listed were below the the number of that in 2000. Predicted populations in 2000 were so much higher than the citizens in three countries. In 1990, figures for populations of Sao Paulo and Jakarta were 15 and 9. 5, respectively. They were so much higher in 2000 while the number in Shanghai of 2000 was lower than the actual number in 1990 (13. 5), with only 12. 5 million people. Looking at the chart, the predicted number of Shanghai was the highest but in fact, there was only 18 million people in 2000. The estimated figures in Jakarta and Shanghai were much higher than the figures for citizens, 14 and 17 million compared to 11. 5 and 12. 5 million.
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table provides comparison for forecasted
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figures
for inhabitants with genuine
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among three countries
namely
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Sao Paulo
, Jakarta and Shanghai over a 10-year-period starting from 1990.

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depicted that the actual
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numbers
in 1990 among the listed were below
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the the
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number
of that in 2000. Predicted populations in 2000 were
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much higher than the citizens in three countries.

In 1990,
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figures
for populations of
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Sao Paulo
and Jakarta were 15 and 9. 5,
respectively
. They were
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much higher in 2000 while the
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number
in Shanghai of 2000 was lower than the actual
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number
in 1990 (13. 5), with
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only
12. 5
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million
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people
.

Looking at the chart, the predicted
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of Shanghai was the highest
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but
in fact, there was
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only
18
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million
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people
in 2000. The estimated
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figures
in Jakarta and Shanghai were much higher than the
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figures
for citizens, 14 and 17
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million
compared to 11. 5 and 12. 5
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million
.
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IELTS academic The table compares actual and predicted figures for populations in three different cities

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