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The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market.

The diagram shows the process for labelling shellfish for the international market. 9agG3

The diagram illustrates how the process of monitoring and labelling shellfish are prepared for the international market. Overall, shellfish after catch experience the labelling, processing and transportation before being distributed in the international market at the end. In the beginning, Artisanal fishermen use GPS location devices on their boats to catch shellfish and when they catch, they send a signal of this device to the satellite which will be monitored by the workers in Santiago. After Catch the shellfish will be labelled and generated with a barcode label to be certified and to be eligible to use. After that, shellfish is sent to the processing plant which will make the products and make it available to be shipped. However, after that shellfish is then checked and verified, finally they will send it by planes before being transported by the trucks and they will distribute it to the international markets in different places.

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shellfish
are prepared
 for the international market. Overall
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shellfish
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catch
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before
being distributed
 in the international market at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

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use
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catch
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shellfish
 and when they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsnaphook
catch
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a signal of this device to the satellite which will be monitored
 by the workers in Santiago. After You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsnaphook
Catch
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclamcrustaceanmollusksnailscallopconch
shellfish
 will be labelled
 and generated with a barcode label to be certified
 and to be eligible to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

After that, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclamcrustaceanmollusksnailscallopconch
shellfish
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the processing plant which will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the products and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it available to be shipped
. However
, after that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclamcrustaceanmollusksnailscallopconch
shellfish
 is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 and verified, finally
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send
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planes
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before
being transported
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different
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