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The bar chart shows the divorce rate in two countries between 2011 and 2015

The bar chart shows the divorce rate in two countries between 2011 and 2015 WEBwD
Taking to the consideration of overall prospective, it is evident from the chart that both the countries had fluctuation trend and divorce rate was highest in Sweden as compared to findland. At fleeting glance, it is crystal clear that divorce rate in findland was around 35% in 2011, whereas, it declined around 8% in 2012. following that, findland divorce rate was approximately 40% in 2013. In 2014 percentage of divorce rate was steady incline about 41%. Moreover, divorce rate remained similar as 2014 at the end of the period. Probing further, Sweden n divorse rate about 45% in 2011 and after a yea divorce rate incline till about 50%. Furthermore, in 2013 around 45% divorse rate showed in Sweden. Divorce rate in Sweden in 2014 was about 40% and it declined about 8% in 2015.
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prospective, it is evident from the chart that both the countries had fluctuation trend and
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was highest in Sweden as compared to
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was approximately 40% in 2013. In 2014 percentage of
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was steady incline about 41%.
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remained similar as 2014 at the
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further
, Sweden n
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about 45% in 2011 and after a yea
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incline till about 50%.
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, in 2013 around 45%
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in Sweden in 2014 was about 40% and it declined about 8% in 2015.

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