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The diagram shows the process by which plastic is recycled

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The diagram illustrates the recycling process of plastic. Overall, the process of plastic recycling begin from collecting the waste bottles and ending with open market for resold. According to the diagram, firstly, the Easter bottles are collected by company and company send all waste plastic by truck to plastic factory. After completing these steps, all plastic waste stored in storage room. In next phase, this waste plastic material send for further processing by sorting out according to the colour. Moreover, the plastic bottles are supervised by experts and after this process plastic grind packed for delivery. Finally, the new products of plastic are shipped to partners to resold in the open market.
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Overall
, the process of
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recycling
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begin
from collecting the
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waste
bottles and ending with open market for resold. According to the diagram,
firstly
, the Easter bottles
are collected
by
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company
and
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company
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send
all
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waste
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plastic
by truck to
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plastic
factory. After completing these steps, all
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plastic
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waste
stored in storage room. In
next
phase, this
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waste
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plastic
material
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send
for
further
processing by sorting out according to the
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colour
.
Moreover
, the
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bottles
are supervised
by experts and after this process
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plastic
grind packed for delivery.
Finally
, the new products of
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plastic
are shipped
to partners to resold in the open market.
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