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The diagram demonstrates the process of producing electricity by the use of geothermal energy.

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The diagram demonstrates the process of producing electricity by the use of geothermal energy. The entire process is divided into five steps. First, the cold water is pumped down into a 4. 5 Km deep well also known as the injection well. In the second step the water pass through the geothermal zone that has hot rocks. This step is converting cold water into hot water. After that in the next step the hot water goes into the production well, and it pumped into the condenser. In the 4th step produces steam and that steam is used to rotate the turbine. In 5th step the turbine rotate through steam power and also that turbine connected with generator. The generator powered by turbine and produces electricity. Means it convert mechanical energy into electricity. Afterwards it transferred through high tension power line for devices that use electricity. In short, a geothermal power plant used water and convert it into steam and through the pressure of steam they rotate a turbine which is attached with generator and that machine produce electricity, and it supplied via power line.
The diagram demonstrates the process of producing
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electricity
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use
of geothermal energy.

The entire process
is divided
into five
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steps
.
First
, the
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cold
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water
is pumped
down into a 4. 5 Km deep well
also
known as the injection well. In the second
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step
the
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water
pass
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through
the geothermal zone that has hot rocks. This
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step
is converting
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cold
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water
into hot
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water
. After that in the
next
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step
the hot
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water
goes into the production well, and it pumped into the condenser. In the 4th
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step
produces steam and that steam is
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used
to rotate the
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turbine
. In 5th
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step
the
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turbine
rotate
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through
steam
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power
and
also
that
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turbine
connected with generator. The generator powered by
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turbine
and produces
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electricity
. Means it convert mechanical energy into
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electricity
. Afterwards it transferred
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through
high tension
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power
line for devices that
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use
electricity.

In short, a geothermal
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power
plant
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used
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water
and convert it into steam and
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through
the pressure of steam they rotate a
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turbine
which
is attached
with generator and that machine produce
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electricity
, and it supplied via
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power
line.
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IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates the process of producing electricity by the use of geothermal energy.

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