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The diagram shows the ingredients of the cigarette.

The diagram shows the ingredients of the cigarette. 9Ke3
The pictorial data depicts the knowledge about what is cigarette made up of. Cigarette include the poisonous chemical substances such as cadmium which is used in batteries, stearic acid, hexamine acetic acid, methane and arsenic. It also contain many more compounds they are as follows carbon monoxide, methanol, toluene, Nicotine, ammonia which is applied at the end of cigarette which stop this ingredients their while inhaling the smoke. Overall, the components which are used to form cigarette are very dangerous for the human and it may cause a death of the particular individual who consume it.
The pictorial data depicts the knowledge about what is
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cigarette
made up of.
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Cigarette
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include
the poisonous chemical substances such as cadmium which is
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used
in batteries,
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stearic
acid,
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hexamine
acetic acid, methane and arsenic. It
also
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contain
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many
more compounds they are as follows carbon monoxide, methanol, toluene, Nicotine, ammonia which
is applied
at the
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end
of
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cigarette
which
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stop
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this
ingredients their while inhaling the smoke.
Overall
, the components which are
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used
to form
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cigarette
are
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very
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dangerous
for the human and it may cause a death of the particular individual who consume it.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the ingredients of the cigarette.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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