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The table illustrates the number of five european nations living in each other's countries in 2001.

The table illustrates the number of five european nations living in each other's countries in 2001. WpoW
Overall, it is clear that, the number of people living in Britain country and while, the number of total people had been declined in poland. To begin with, the number of british people were lived in Italy, that was 403000. However, they had been less british people were in Poland country, which was 67. In addition, the german numberof people had been lived in Britain nation, that was 362000. Moreover, around 360 Italian person were lived in Poland country. On the other hand, the number of Polish people had been more interested for lived their Britain that was 550000. However, they were less polish people were lived in spain country, which was 86500. Furthermore, they were huge amount of Spanish people had been lived in Germany, that was 356000.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the number of five european nations living in each other's countries in 2001.

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