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the graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

the graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. BDmd

The line graph compares changes in the number of cars per household in Great Britain over a period of 36 year. At on glance, it is axiomatic that the car ownership increased between 1971 and 2007. In particular, the number of households without any car fell steadily, in contrast to the the number of two car owners which increased steadily over the period shown. In 1971, almost half of the UK residents did not have a regular use of car. Around 44% and 8% of the proportion of Britain owned one and two cars respectively. It was uncommon for citizens to have three or more cars, with only 1% of the population fall into this category. By 2007, the greatest change was seen in the proportion of families with no car, fell to about 25%, the second dramatic change occurred in two car owners, rose to approximately 26%. Households having single car remained relatively stable over the 36 years with little changes in the figures. At the late 1970s, the figure for families using more than two cars increased and reach to a peak of roughly 6% at the end of the period.

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