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The diagram shows the how rainwater reused

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The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The picture illustrates the various stages involve in recycling natural water collected from rain. First of all, the falling rainwater from sky is stored in a large dam. After that, it is supplied into a water treatment plant, where rainwater is purified in order to make it suitable for human consumption. Following that, drinking water is send to public homes where it is used for various household purposes. From this, used water in houses is piped into a waste water treatment plant. After treatment, recycled water is send back to home user and excess treated water generated from this plant is drained into a river. Apart from this, rainwater is also collected directly in a water tank attach to a house. This water is mainly utilized for cleaning purposes and for watering the garden. Finally, after treatment storm-water is send via drain to river. Overall, the rainwater is a reliable source of renewable water and it is greatly saving the environment by reducing pressure on ground water.
The diagram below
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shows
how
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rainwater
is reused
. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and
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make
comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the various stages involve in recycling natural
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water
collected from rain.

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First of all
, the falling
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rainwater
from sky
is stored
in a large dam. After that, it
is supplied
into a
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water
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treatment
plant, where
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rainwater
is purified
in order to
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make
it suitable for human consumption. Following that, drinking
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water
is
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send
to public homes where it is
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used
for various household purposes. From this,
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used
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water
in
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houses
is piped
into a waste
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water
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treatment
plant. After
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treatment
, recycled
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water
is
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send
back to home user and excess treated
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water
generated from this plant
is drained
into a river.

Apart from this,
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rainwater
is
also
collected
directly
in a
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water
tank attach to a
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house
. This
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water
is
mainly
utilized for cleaning purposes and for watering the garden.
Finally
, after
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treatment
storm-water is
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send
via drain to river.

Overall
, the
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rainwater
is a reliable source of renewable
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water
and it is
greatly
saving the environment by reducing pressure on ground
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water
.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the how rainwater reused

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