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The diagram shows the different stages involved in a life of a frog.

The diagram shows the different stages involved in a life of a frog. rY7L2
The chart illustrates the stages in the life of a frog. All in all, this life cycle is composed of some step from eggs to an adult frog. The process begins with eggs on the water. These eggs hatch to be immature frog, called embryo. Once hatching, the embryo experiences a stage in which it changes to be a tadpole. Over the next days, the tadpole emerges front legs where the tadpole cannot breathe. In the following stage, the tadpole has complete legs — front legs and back legs, starting to breath. The tadpole still has a fin, a long fin. When the stage in which the tadpole can breathe on the land is complete, the body of the tadpole will be bigger and bigger, while the fin will decrease in size. A tadpole’s state of being able to breath and having complete legs is the stage of being tadpole frog. The tadpole frog can live on both the land and the water, but the fin can still be seen. The final stage is being an adult frog, when the fin of the tadpole frog decreases almost disappear.
The chart illustrates the
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stages
in the life of a
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frog
. All in all, this life cycle
is composed
of
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some
step from eggs to an adult frog.

The process
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begins
with eggs on the water. These eggs hatch to be immature
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frog
, called embryo. Once hatching, the embryo experiences a
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stage
in which it
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changes
to be a
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tadpole
. Over the
next
days, the
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tadpole
emerges front
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legs
where the
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tadpole
cannot
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breathe
. In the following
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stage
, the
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tadpole
has complete
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legs
— front
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legs
and back
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legs
, starting to
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breath
. The
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tadpole
still
has a fin, a long fin. When the
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stage
in which the
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tadpole
can
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breathe
on the land is complete, the body of the
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tadpole
will be bigger and bigger, while the fin will decrease in size.

A
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tadpole’s
state of being able to
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breath
and having complete
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legs
is the
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stage
of being
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tadpole
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frog
. The
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tadpole
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frog
can
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live
on both the land and the water,
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but
the fin can
still
be
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seen
. The final
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stage
is being an adult
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frog
, when the fin of the
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tadpole
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frog
decreases almost disappear.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the different stages involved in a life of a frog.

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