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The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road.

The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. ajYV

Shown by the diagram is the information about a plan to install some new facilities on Foster Road. Overall, there will be extensive development with regards to construction of traffic sign as well as pavement expansion. Looking at the first diagram, Foster Road located between SE 84 and 85 revenue to be specific merely consists of some house buildings and electrical grids along the both sides. Additionally, the main road is huge enough where it could be filled by 2 cars in one direction. Turing to the second diagram, sidewalks will be expanded on both sides of the road, and there will be new bicycle lanes on which citizens could go cycling safely. Some trees are instead likely to be planted along both sides of the road, which could generate fresh air for not only walkers but also vehicle users. Moreover, the traffic sign and crossing lane passing through between both roads will be installed at the lower end of the road so that it might be able to reduce the traffic accident on the road. Interestingly, as a result of the construction, lanes for cars will be smaller, so it could merely be filled by a car for each way.

Shown by the diagram is the information about a plan to install This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new facilities on Foster Road.

Overall
, there will be extensive development Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
with regards to
 construction of traffic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
as well
 as pavement expansion.

Looking at the first
 diagram, Foster You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
Road
 located between SE 84 and 85 revenue to be specific merely
 consists of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 buildings and electrical grids along the both sides. Additionally
, the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 is huge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 where it could be filled
 by 2 cars in one direction.

Turing to the second diagram, sidewalks will be expanded
 on both sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, and there will be new bicycle lanes on which citizens could go cycling safely
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 trees are instead
 likely to be planted
 along both sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, which could generate fresh air for not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 walkers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 vehicle users. Moreover
, the traffic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 and crossing lane passing through between both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 will be installed
 at the lower This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it might be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the traffic accident on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. Interestingly
, as a result
 of the construction, lanes for cars will be smaller, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it could merely
be filled
 by a car for each way. 