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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. yeMg
The chart above illustrates different varieties of places which tourists in Britain visited in 1999. Overall, the most visited types of place are the themeparks which have a quite similar percentage of visitors with the museums and galleries. Inside the themeparks there are also categories of famous places to visit such as, blackpool pleasure beach, alton towers, pleasureland in southport, chessington world of adventures and legoland in winsdor. Besides these, wildlife parks, zoos, historic houses as well as monuments are also quite popular among tourists. The percentage of people going to theme parks are winning with 38% with a single percent difference with the museums and galleries with 37%. For others, there is a significant drop in the amount of tourists visiting with historic houses and monuments being 16 % and wildlife and zooz being 9%. The places which people most often go to in theme parks are the Blackpool Pleasure Beach with 47% which have quite a significant difference with other places such as Alton towers having 17% of the tourists visiting, Pleasureland in southport with 16% and both chessington world of adventures as well as legoland in windsor with 10%.
The chart above illustrates
different
varieties of
places
which tourists in Britain visited in 1999.

Overall
, the most visited types of
place
are the
themeparks
which have a quite similar percentage of visitors with the museums and galleries. Inside the
themeparks
there are
also
categories of
famous
places
to visit such as,
blackpool
pleasure beach,
alton
towers,
pleasureland
in
southport
,
chessington
world of adventures and
legoland
in
winsdor
.
Besides
these, wildlife parks, zoos, historic
houses
as well
as monuments are
also
quite popular among tourists.

The percentage of
people
going to theme parks are winning with 38% with a single percent difference with the museums and galleries with 37%. For others, there is a significant drop in the amount of tourists visiting with historic
houses
and monuments being 16 % and wildlife and
zooz
being 9%.

The
places
which
people
most
often
go to in theme parks are the Blackpool Pleasure Beach with 47% which have quite a significant difference with other
places
such as Alton towers having 17% of the tourists visiting,
Pleasureland
in
southport
with 16% and both
chessington
world of adventures
as well as
legoland
in
windsor
with 10%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.

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