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The given chart illustrates the main reason for study among of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employer

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The given chart illustrates the main reason for study among of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employer overall the chart information provides that under 26 age people prefer career most and interest less. further more 26-29 age individuals go for interest people from 30-39 also prefer career over interest but in case of 40-49 its constant and over 49 of age choose interest over career In second chart the data represent that employer support in more in 26 age people and its slightly decrease from 26 - 29 and 30-39 then increase from 40 to over 49
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In second chart the data represent that employer support in more in 26
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the main reason for study among of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employer

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102 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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