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The diagram shows preceses of environmental issues by a product over

The diagram shows preceses of environmental issues by a product over alRLw
The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over, there ia lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world. Overall, There 7 stages to produce the product from the design to the customers for the last stage is recycling the production. life circle for production for the environment. The production form the industry it negatively point for atmosphere. In the Stage 1 design and planning for the project. Second stage goes to the industry to consumption the material and energy resources the gas goes up and defctive the environment, third it’s production than trasmittied to the store of shop. fourth stage parking the product and distribution. stage five sale the production and drop to there house. Sixth stage use by the saler man then disposal from the productionafter long time use. stage seven recycling the product and reuse. This is a life cycle for the production.
The cycle illustrates
preceses
of environmental issues by a
product
over, there
ia
lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world.

Overall
, There 7
stages
to produce the
product
from the design to the customers for the last
stage
is recycling the
production
.
life
circle for
production
for the environment. The
production
form
the industry it
negatively
point
for atmosphere.

In the
Stage
1 design and planning for the project. Second
stage
goes to the industry to consumption the material and energy resources the gas goes up and
defctive
the environment, third it’s
production
than
trasmittied
to the store of shop.
fourth
stage
parking the
product
and distribution.
stage
five sale the
production
and drop to
there
house
. Sixth
stage
use
by the
saler
man
then disposal from the
productionafter
long time
use
.
stage
seven recycling the
product
and reuse. This is a life cycle for the
production
.
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