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The table illustrates the consumption in variety items in five main countries in 2002.

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The table illustrates the consumption in variety items in five main countries in 2002. Overall, food/drinks/tobacco had the highest percentage of using while leisure and education were the lowest figures. Turkey people were always the most user in 3 categories. In 2002, the number of people using food/drinks/tobacco were over 14%, especially Turkey got 32. 14% and 28. 01% in Ireland. This percentages were huge comparing with leisure/education figure, which was under 4%, for instance 1. 98% in Spain. Clothing/footwear was in avarage, which the lowest was 5. 4% and the highest was 9%. The figures of Turkey were impressing. It had 32. 14% in food/drinks/tobacco, 6. 63% in clothing/footwear and 4. 39% in leisure/education, which were the top.
The table illustrates the consumption in variety items in five main countries in 2002.
Overall
, food/drinks/tobacco had the highest percentage of using while leisure and education were the lowest figures. Turkey
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were always the most user in 3 categories. In 2002, the number of
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using food/drinks/tobacco were over 14%,
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32. 14% and 28. 01% in Ireland.
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percentages were huge comparing with leisure/education figure, which was under 4%,
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1. 98% in Spain. Clothing/footwear was in
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, which the lowest was 5. 4% and the highest was 9%. The figures of Turkey
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were impressing
. It had 32. 14% in food/drinks/tobacco, 6. 63% in clothing/footwear and 4. 39% in leisure/education, which were the top.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the consumption in variety items in five main countries in 2002.

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