Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The diagram shows one of the possible ways to produce ceramic pots.

The diagram shows one of the possible ways to produce ceramic pots. Overall, there are a total of 11 steps in the process of ceramic pots production. First, raw materials to make ceramic pots are dug out of the ground by a digging machine before being transported by a truck to a factory where the next 8 steps pots are followed to manufacture ceramic spots. At the factory, the raw materials are crushed into powder by a machine. In the next step, the powder is mixed with water, and then this mixture is poured into moulds that form the mixture in the shape of a pot. Then, these moulds are dried from 4 to 6 hours to create assembled clay pots. Next, the clay pots are placed into an oven and heated at a temperature of 1000 degrees Celsius. Once they are ready, they are coloured and heated in another oven for colour firing. The outcome of this step is the final products which are finished ceramic pots.
The diagram
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
one of the possible ways to produce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ceramic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pots
.
Overall
, there are a total of 11
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
steps
in the process of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ceramic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pots
production.

First
, raw materials to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ceramic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pots
are dug
out of the ground by a digging machine
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
being transported
by a truck to a factory where the
next
8
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
steps
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pots
are followed
to manufacture
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ceramic
spots.

At the factory, the raw materials
are crushed
into powder by a machine. In the
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
step
, the powder
is mixed
with water, and then this mixture
is poured
into
Possible spelling mistake. ‘moulds’ is British English.
moulds
that form the mixture in the shape of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pot
. Then, these
Possible spelling mistake. ‘moulds’ is British English.
moulds
are dried
from 4 to 6 hours to create assembled clay
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pots
.
Next
, the clay
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pots
are placed
into an oven and heated at a temperature of 1000 degrees Celsius. Once they are ready, they are
Possible spelling mistake. ‘coloured’ is British English.
coloured
and heated in another oven for
Possible spelling mistake. ‘colour’ is British English.
colour
firing. The outcome of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
step
is the final products which
are finished
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ceramic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pots
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The diagram shows one of the possible ways to produce ceramic pots.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The diagram shows one of the possible ways to produce ceramic pots.