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How electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

The diagram illustrates how hydropower plants capture energy from falling water to generate electricity. Overall, there are several distinct stages, from the initial passage of the water from the dam to the eventual electricity transmitting to a national grid. The procedure commences with river water stores in the high-level reservoir with a dam. During the day time, the intake opens in order to make the water flow along the slope. In the next, the force of falling water pushing against the turbine’s blades causes the turbine to spin. After that, power is generated which gets supplied to the national grid through the power lines. On the other hand, during the night stage, the water is transported from a low-level reservoir through the reversible turbines to pump back to the high-level tank. So that it can be reprocessed for the next activities.
The diagram illustrates how hydropower plants capture energy from falling
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water
to generate electricity.

Overall
, there are several distinct stages, from the initial passage of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
from the dam to the eventual electricity transmitting to a national grid.

The procedure commences with river
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
stores in the high-level reservoir with a dam. During the day time, the intake opens in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
flow along the slope. In the
next
, the force of falling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
pushing against the turbine’s blades causes the turbine to spin. After that, power
is generated
which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
supplied to the national grid through the power lines.

On the other hand
, during the night stage, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is transported
from a low-level reservoir through the reversible turbines to pump back to the high-level tank.
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So
that it can
be reprocessed
for the
next
activities.
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IELTS academic How electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
141 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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