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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made.

The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. maLA

The diagram illustrates the process of how tomato ketchup is made. Overall, there are 15 steps in the process, from when the tomatoes are picked by hand and put in a basket to the time the tomato ketchup is served with food. First of all, the tomatoes are picked by hand and put in a basket. Then, the tomatoes are checked for quality and delivered to the ketchup factory by truck. After that, stalks, seeds and skins are removed from the tomatoes. Next, the tomatoes are stored in a container and crushed to become liquid. After that, sugar salt and vinegar are added. Then, the liquid is boiled and left for 2-hours to become tomato ketchup. After some time, the ketchup is poured into bottles and labelled. After that, the bottles of ketchup are checked for quality. Then, the bottles of tomato ketchup are packed into boxes and loaded into a truck. After that, the tomato ketchup is delivered to supermarkets by truck. Finally, the ketchup is served with food such as hamburgers and fries.

The diagram illustrates the process of how tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is made
. Overall
, there are 15 steps in the process, from when the tomatoes are picked
 by hand and put in a basket to the time the tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is served
 with food.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the tomatoes are picked
 by hand and put in a basket. Then, the tomatoes are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 for quality and delivered to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 factory by truck. After that, stalks, seeds and skins are removed
 from the tomatoes. Next
, the tomatoes are stored
 in a container and crushed to become liquid. After that, sugar salt and vinegar are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Then, the liquid is boiled
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 for 2-hours to become tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
. After This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is poured
 into bottles and labelled. After that, the bottles of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 for quality. Then, the bottles of tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
are packed
 into boxes and loaded into a truck. After that, the tomato You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is delivered
 to supermarkets by truck. Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgravyseasoningsaltdressingsaucerelish
ketchup
is served
 with food such as hamburgers and fries. 