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The diagram provide a process of how advertisements are produced. Generally, the procedure involves six steps, starting from preparing strategic plans and ending with publishing the advertisement production. First, objectives and messages involved in strategic advertising plan is initiated and then forwarded to advertising agency’ team. Next, people in the team will work together to come up with possible ideas. Then the client will take a look at the ideas and begin to choose the one which he or she considers most appropriate. After that, the advertising agency’ team take the ideas and discuss about developing the concept. Following this, the client and agency will gather together to analyze and adjust the advertisement. Finally, it is put into production and the best version of advertisement will be published.
The diagram
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provide
a process of how
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advertisements
are produced
.
Generally
, the procedure involves six steps, starting from preparing strategic plans and ending with publishing the
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advertisement
production.

First
, objectives and messages involved in strategic advertising plan
is initiated
and then forwarded to advertising agency’ team.
Next
,
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people
in the team will work together to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
up with possible
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
. Then the client will take a look at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and
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begin
to choose the one which he or she considers most appropriate. After that, the advertising agency’ team take the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and
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discuss about developing
the concept. Following this, the client and agency will gather together to analyze and adjust the
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advertisement
.
Finally
, it
is put
into production and the best version of
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advertisement
will
be published
.
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IELTS academic the diagram shows how the advertisements are produced

Academic
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2 paragraphs
128 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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